Wednesday, 28 June 2017

Clothing writing

I am a black coat in the washing machine.
Oh there's my owner, he takes me out of the washing machine he is
ready to go out in the rain.
He puts me on he gets his umbrella and we bolt ⚡️ out the door with a big
charge!!!!!!!!!!

We head out into the misty wonderful world and
I hear lots of car horns beeping and there's lots of striking thunder.

We are about to cross the road I'm worried that we are going to get run over
but we make it across the road.

I don't know much about life and the world.
I haven't seen outside because I am brand new.

In my writing I used WOW words but I want to improve on my Punctuation.

What I want to improve: I want to improve my punctuation..


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